My happiest experience

After graduating university, I didn't have any rest, because I had to work in a company for a living. And I think,I had worked in a company for one and half years.Then,I had lose my job,because I was a part time worker.As soon as I lost my job, I was really depressed and felt sad. But I decided to change my mind,then, planed to take a rest before finding another company. And one month later,I had gone on a tour for one week to foreign country. It was very excited,bacause of exotic feeling,atmosphere, and different people.I could change my mind about my life, it means,I could take a rest without any interruption.And I felt happy from my mind.

Hello [이름]! Sometimes, we feel tired of working continuously for a long period of time. We also need to give ourselves a break, to refresh our minds and find the motivation to continue working. A vacation would be the best way to find ourselves again and start fresh. See you in class!^^ Connie   After graduating university, I didn't have any rest, because I had to work in a company for a living. >> Correct^^ And I think, I had worked in a company for one and half years. >> Correct^^ Then, I had lose my job, because I was a part time worker. >> Then, I had lost my job, because I was a part time worker. As soon as I lost my job, I was really depressed and felt sad. >> Correct^^ But I decided to change my mind, >> Correct^^ then, planed to take a rest before finding another company. >> Then, planned to take a rest before finding another company. And one month later, I had gone on a tour for one week to foreign country. >> And one month later, I had gone on a tour for one week to a foreign country. It was very excited,bacause of exotic feeling,atmosphere, and different people. >> It was very exciting because of the exotic feeling, atmosphere, and different people. I could change my mind about my life, it means, I could take a rest without any interruption. >> Correct^^ And I felt happy from my mind. >> And I felt happy from the core of my mind.