my happy memories
학생이 쓴 원문
I have many memories.
anmong the rest, i like happy memories.
one day,my family went to Australia.
it was very good experience.
and I took a break from school because of the typhoon.
but we(i and my friends) were just happy!^p^
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]. It is so wonderful to read your homework. Thank you for sharing your happy memories. I appreciate it. Continue to follow proper capitalization and placing of punctuation marks. Let\'s talk again on Wednesday. Have a good evening. ~ Teacher Jane c\",)
I have many memories.
>>> CORRECT =)
anmong the rest, i like happy memories.
>>> I like happy memories the most.
one day,my family went to Australia.
>>> One time, my family went to Australia.
it was very good experience.
>>> It was a very good experience.
and I took a break from school because of the typhoon.
>>> And there was a time I took a break from school because of the typhoon.
but we(i and my friends) were just happy!^p^
>>> But I and my friends were just happy.
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