My happy memory
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite memory with my mother is sleeping with my mother.
Beaucause my mom is warm.
So I want to sleep with my mother.
And my mom bore me.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Robert!
Thank you so much for doing your homework!
It\'s so cute how close you are with your mother. ^^
I hope you stay close with her til you\'re old.
~~t. Ally
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My favorite memory with my mother is sleeping with my mother.
>> My favorite memory with my mother is sleeping next to my mother.
Beaucause my mom is warm.
>> Because my mom is warm.
So I want to sleep with my mother.
>> So I always want to sleep next to her.
And my mom bore me.
>> And my mom bores me. (I\'m not sure what you mean by this sentence, please tell me more on Monday. ^^)
>> My favorite memory with my mother is sleeping next to my mother.
Beaucause my mom is warm.
>> Because my mom is warm.
So I want to sleep with my mother.
>> So I always want to sleep next to her.
And my mom bore me.
>> And my mom bores me. (I\'m not sure what you mean by this sentence, please tell me more on Monday. ^^)
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