My healthy foods.

2020-06-16 · 첨삭 강사 Gabby

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Hi Gabby! I did my homework last Saturday. But it was error of upload. My was mistake. First, I will talk to you about my daughter. She is really independent. I was her driver and I had a lot of times with her. But I didn\\\'t know her well. I think that she is really good child if she is not my daughter. She is hard-headed. I am difficult handle her. Maybe we expect to point high each other. She is kind to me these days. Am I feeling since change my [이름]d? Anyway I\\\'m good. I wake up drink a glass water every morning and vita[이름] extract with some water. After breakfast, I eat vita[이름] D this days. This is medicine for immunity. Sometimes I have Samgeatang, Loach soup and several meat. I love to eat Loachtang. What foods do you like to eat? Good night Ganny.

강사 첨삭

Hi Suzan. Awesome work. Thanks for doing your homework.
- T Gabby.
Hi Gabby!
>> Correct.
I did my homework last Saturday. But it was error of upload. My was mistake.
>> I did my homework last Saturday but there was an error in uploading. It was my mistake.
First, I will talk to you about my daughter.
>> Correct.
She is really independent. 
>> Correct.
I was her driver and I had a lot of times with her.
>> I used to drive for her and I spent a lot of time with her.
But I didn\'t know her well.
>> But I didn\'t know her that much.
I think that she is really good child if she is not my daughter. 
>> I think that she can be a good child if she is not my daughter.
She is hard-headed. I am difficult handle her.
>> It\'s difficult for me to handle her because she\'s hard-headed.
Maybe we expect to point high each other. 
>> Maybe we have high expectations to each other.
She is kind to me these days.
>> But she has been kind to me these days.
Am I feeling since change my [이름]d? Anyway I\\\'m good.
>> I am feeling it. Anyway, I\'m good.

I wake up drink a glass water every morning and vita[이름] extract with some water.
>> I drink water every morning and take vita[이름] extract with some water.
After breakfast, I eat vita[이름] D this days.
>> I also take vita[이름] D after breakfast.
This is medicine for immunity.
>> It\'s a medicine for my immune system.
Sometimes I have Samgeatang, Loach soup and several meat.
>> Sometimes I eat samgeatang, loach soup and a lot of meat.
I love to eat Loachtang.
>> I love to eat loachtang.
What foods do you like to eat?
>> What are the foods that you like to eat?
Good night Gabby.
>> Correct.

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