My hidden but powerful strategy to winning the competition!

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I love this composition very much! It is well-written and there is even a picture attached to it. I found myself nodding and agreeing while reading all your ideas. looking forward to seeing more of your designs in the future! ^^

~~Teacher Kate 

1. \"Your efforts will never betray you.\" It\'s really important to keep this sentence in mind but, before we pour our effort into works, setting the goal and direction is more important.

>>CORRECT!

2. Efforts without concrete direction are sadly meaningless when it comes to preparing the competition. Generally, competition is held by the company so searching the company\'s main business and recent trends are a good source to set a goal.

>>Efforts without concrete direction are sadly meaningless when it comes to preparing for the competition. Generally, the competition is held by the company so researching about the company\'s main business and recent trends are a good source to set a goal.

3. For example, if the competition\'s main challenge is making an aircraft, the design goal depends on the company\'s character. If the company is focused on the military industry, object detection and defense system will be contained the design goal.

>>CORRECT!
4. On the other hand, if the company focused on the civil aviation industry, a safe landing system and flight stability will be included in the design goal. As those example shows, finding the company\'s needs and setting the appropriate strategy is hidden but the main key to solving the problem.

>>On the other hand, if the company is focused on the civil aviation industry, a safe landing system and flight stability will be included in the design goal. As those example show, finding the company\'s needs and setting the appropriate strategy is a secret but the main key to solving the problem.