My hidden card

2021-05-07 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

As you know, I’m working in trading company and we mostly produce and export such garments. So natually, I have been interested in fashion and beauty. I like to wear chic style fasion and do natual make-up, which point is natural glow skin and eyebrow texture. And a warn tone is well matched with my face color. So the most of my lipstick is color coral, dried rose or tone downed orange. And I never forget wear the earings, which is my hidden card.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!
I do see your point.
You have discussed the topic in detail.
The examples you gave are both practical and specific.
Keep up the good work!
~~ Teacher Sharon

As you know, I’m working in trading company and we mostly produce and export such garments.

>> As you know, I’m working for a trading company and we mostly produce and export garments.
So natually, I have been interested in fashion and beauty.

>> So naturally, I have been interested in fashion and beauty.
I like to wear chic style fasion and do natual make-up, which point is natural glow skin and eyebrow texture.

>> I like to wear chic outfits and do natural make-up where the main points are natural and glowing skin and eyebrow texture.
And a warn tone is well matched with my face color.

>> A warm tone matches my skin very well.
So the most of my lipstick is color coral, dried rose or tone downed orange.

>> So most of the lipstick that I have are coral, dried rose and toned down orange.
And I never forget wear the earings, which is my hidden card.

>> I also never forget to wear earrings which is my hidden card.

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