My hobbies
학생이 쓴 원문
I love traveling and hiking. When traveling, I prefer hiking some trails or allies to visiting tourist attractions.
I like to watch movies. But I don\'t like to watch horror movies or action movies
.l also like to see some YouTubes and web toons. Lastly I like taking pictures and posting.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Gi [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your interests; I enjoy hiking and taking pictures as well. ^^
Have a wonderful day and I\'ll see you tomorrow! :)
-T.Jhozel
I love traveling and hiking.
>> Correct!
When traveling, I prefer hiking some trails or allies to visiting tourist attractions.
>> When I travel, I prefer hiking trails or visiting allies to visiting tourist attractions.
I like to watch movies.
>> Correct!
But I don\'t like to watch horror movies or action movies.
>> Correct!
OR: But I don\'t like to watch horror or action movies.
l also like to see some YouTubes and web toons.
>> Correct!
OR: I also enjoy watching YouTube videos and web comics.
Lastly I like taking pictures and posting.
>> Correct!
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