my hobby~!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good morning J!!! Yes of course you are a very good student. Not only that you always make time for your English class you also try to give an extra effort to make compositions and practice. So I wanted you to continue this attitude surely in no time you will become a very good english speaker too. See you later J!!!
Lei J
I ordered three books via the internet yesterday afternoon.
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This morning, when I couldn't remember what I ordered,
>>This morning, I couldn뭪 remember what I ordered.
a man visited me and gave a package.
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Wow that was my happiest moment today. ^^
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I like books and reading very much.
>>I like reading books very much
I bought books which are two english book,
>>I bought two english books
'matilda' written by Roald Dahl and 'Charltte's web' written by E.B.White, and 'Status Anxiety' written by Alain de Botton in korean.
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One day you advised me reading english book and magazine good for me.
>>You told me to try reading english books and magazines before because it will be good for me
I agree. So I am trying to read various things.
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well. What dou you think? I am a good student. Is it right?
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Anyway, I don't want to read today because of my exaustion.
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I'll go home when it's all over.
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bye lei~~~see you tomorrow~!
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