My hobby is fishing
학생이 쓴 원문
Nowaday I said \"Mmm..\" a lot of times when I talked with you.
Today I was surprised because of phone ringing . I waked up and picked up my phone .
I got to know english studing time.
I was sorry very much. Yesterday I had the wrong alarm setting.
I have much fishing story .
I want to talk english that at this morning. but I said Mmm almost.
I went usually once in two weeks. Sometime went every weekend.
I liked fishing in sea. before 3 years I started fishing with my wife.
At that time I had a lot of terrible situation at my company. so I need something.
By some chance I did fishing and I liked . Fishing had my head clean.
When I did fishing I didn\'t think except that and saw sea. so I liked that.
when I caught fish at first time I said Gee! and was very happy .
My fishing point was huge raft on sea. There was a huge net inside.
The manager put a lot of fish in the net. so I caught many fish.
강사 첨삭
Hello John. Thank you for this. I have actually never tried fishing but I m willing to try it out. It does look fun.
- T. Beth
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>>> Nowadays, I say \"Mmm...\" a lot of times when I talk with you.
Today I was surprised because of phone ringing.
>>> Today, I was surprised because of the phone ringing.
I waked up and picked up my phone.
>>> I woke up and picked up my phone.
I got to know english studing time.
I got to know english studing time.
>>> I realized it was time to study Egnlish.
I was sorry very much.
I was sorry very much.
>>> I was very sorry.
Yesterday I had the wrong alarm setting.
>>> Yesterday, I set the alarm wrong.
I have much fishing story.
>>> Yesterday, I set the alarm wrong.
I have much fishing story.
>>> I have a lot of fishing stories.
I want to talk english that at this morning. but I said Mmm almost.
>>> I wanted to talk about those this morning but I just kept saying \"Mmm...\" almost all the time.
I went usually once in two weeks.
>>> I wanted to talk about those this morning but I just kept saying \"Mmm...\" almost all the time.
I went usually once in two weeks.
>>> I usually went fishing once in two weeks.
Sometime went every weekend.
>>> Sometimes,I went every weekend.
I liked fishing in sea.
I liked fishing in sea.
>>> I liked fishing in the sea.
before 3 years I started fishing with my wife.
>>> 3 years ago, I started fishing with my wife.
At that time I had a lot of terrible situation at my company. so I need something.
>>> At that time, I had a lot of terrible situations in my company so I need something to get those off my mind.
>>> At that time, I had a lot of terrible situations in my company so I need something to get those off my mind.
By some chance I did fishing and I liked .
>>> I had chances to go fishing and I liked it.
Fishing had my head clean.
>>> Fishing helped me clear up my mind.
When I did fishing I didn\'t think except that and saw sea. so I liked that.
When I did fishing I didn\'t think except that and saw sea. so I liked that.
>>> When I did fishing I didn\'t think of anything except that and looked at the sea, so I liked that.
when I caught fish at first time I said Gee! and was very happy .
>>> When I caught a fish for the first time, I said \"Gee!\" and was very happy.
>>> When I caught a fish for the first time, I said \"Gee!\" and was very happy.
My fishing point was huge raft on sea.
>>> My fishing point was a huge raft in the sea.
There was a huge net inside.
>>> correct
The manager put a lot of fish in the net.
The manager put a lot of fish in the net.
>>> The manager put a lot of fishes in the net.
so I caught many fish.
>>> So I caught many fishes.
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