my hobby is to make furniture
학생이 쓴 원문
I made bed frame by wood .
It was for my first daughter.
It has a two drawer.
I liked to make furniture by wood.
I made sofa, desk , chair and bed .
It is my hobby .
I have a nine furniture made .
I made livingroom at my home. because my house was apartment.
I designed the furniture.
One of ways to make funiture is as follows.
I design all part of furniture. I decied width,length, hight and thick.
and I order that to special store in web site.
and I assemble that and paint varnish and color.
Other of was to make funiture is as follows.
I choose similiar half made product at web site. and I order that . and I assemble that and paint.
I used natural varnish and paint. that don`t smell.
I guess the varnish that you told woult be a different product.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Sir [이름].
- T, Beth
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I made bed frame by wood .
>>> I made abed frame with wood.
It was for my first daughter.
It was for my first daughter.
>>> correct
It has a two drawer.
It has a two drawer.
>>> It has two drawer.
I liked to make furniture by wood.
I liked to make furniture by wood.
>>> I like making furniture with wood.
I made sofa, desk , chair and bed .
I made sofa, desk , chair and bed .
>>> I made a sofa, desk , chair and bed.
It is my hobby .
>>> correct
I have a nine furniture made .
>>> I have made nine furniture so far.
I made livingroom at my home. because my house was apartment.
>>> I made them in the living room in my house because I live in an apartment.
I designed the furniture.
I have a nine furniture made .
>>> I have made nine furniture so far.
I made livingroom at my home. because my house was apartment.
>>> I made them in the living room in my house because I live in an apartment.
I designed the furniture.
>>> correct
One of ways to make funiture is as follows.
>>> The ways to make the furniture is as follows.
I design all part of furniture. I decied width,length, hight and thick.
One of ways to make funiture is as follows.
>>> The ways to make the furniture is as follows.
I design all part of furniture. I decied width,length, hight and thick.
>>> I design all parts of the furniture. I decide the width, length, height and thickness.
and I order that to special store in web site.
and I order that to special store in web site.
>>> Then I order it from a special store online.
and I assemble that and paint varnish and color.
>>> I assemble that and paint varnish and color.
and I assemble that and paint varnish and color.
>>> I assemble that and paint varnish and color.
Other of was to make funiture is as follows.
>>> Other of ways to make furniture is as follows.
>>> Other of ways to make furniture is as follows.
I choose similiar half made product at web site. and I order that . and I assemble that and paint.
>>> I choose a similar half made product from the web site. I order that and I assemble then paint.
>>> I choose a similar half made product from the web site. I order that and I assemble then paint.
I used natural varnish and paint. that don`t smell.
>>> I used natural varnish and paint that don`t smell.
I guess the varnish that you told woult be a different product.
>>> I guess the varnish that you said is a different product.
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