My holiday.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Gabby.
How are you?
I had fun days and the weather was good.
Last Thursday, I went to play the golf club in Yongin with my family.
Last Saturday, I went and walked to Gihiung Reservoir.
The circumference of a reservoir is about 10 kilometers therefore I was very tired.
The place isn\'t so good of landscape.
We ate lunch to steak at restaurant.
And then we come back home and we ate dinner to dumpling stew which my son cooked.
Good night. See you tomorrow.
강사 첨삭
Hi Suzan. Thanks for sharing. :)
-T.Gabby :)
Hello, Gabby.
>> Correct.
How are you?
How are you?
>> Correct.
I had fun days and the weather was good.
I had fun days and the weather was good.
>> I had fun today and the weather was good.
Last Thursday, I went to play the golf club in Yongin with my family.
Last Thursday, I went to play the golf club in Yongin with my family.
>> Correct.
Last Saturday, I went and walked to Gihiung Reservoir.
Last Saturday, I went and walked to Gihiung Reservoir.
>> Correct.
The circumference of a reservoir is about 10 kilometers therefore I was very tired.
The circumference of a reservoir is about 10 kilometers therefore I was very tired.
>> Correct.
The place isn\'t so good of landscape.
The place isn\'t so good of landscape.
>> The place\'s landscape isn\'t so good.
We ate lunch to steak at restaurant.
We ate lunch to steak at restaurant.
>> We ate steak for lunch in the restaurant.
And then we come back home and we ate dinner to dumpling stew which my son cooked.
And then we come back home and we ate dinner to dumpling stew which my son cooked.
>> And then we went home and we ate dinner to dumpling stew which my son cooked.
Good night. See you tomorrow.
Good night. See you tomorrow.
>> Correct.
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