my home
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Oh so you wanna know about my place alright well…first of all I live in apartment which is located in suji. And I spent very comfortable life while I stay in my house in the middle of everything. Its because of apartment garden. You know there is a little cute garden façade of my apartment. So I can see that garden looks out over my room window. And also my room isn’t that much intricate. That’s why I felt comfortable when I stay in my room. It’s perfect!
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Hi Robin!
Thanks for describing your home. Don\'t forget to use articles when you are talking about countable nouns. ^^
Thanks for describing your home. Don\'t forget to use articles when you are talking about countable nouns. ^^
~T. Maine
Oh so you wanna know about my place alright well…
>>Correct.
first of all I live in apartment which is located in suji.
>>First of all, I live in an apartment which is located in Suji.
And I spent very comfortable life while I stay in my house in the middle of everything.
>>And I spend a very comfortable life while staying in my house in the middle of everything.
Its because of apartment garden.
>>It\'s because of the apartment garden in my house.
You know there is a little cute garden façade of my apartment.
>>You know there is a cute garden in the facade of my apartment.
So I can see that garden looks out over my room window.
>>So I can see that garden when I look out over my room\'s window.
And also my room isn’t that much intricate.
>>And also my room isn\'t that much intricate.
That’s why I felt comfortable when I stay in my room.
>> That\'s why I feel very comfortable when I stay in my bedroom.
It’s perfect!
>> Correct. ^^
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