My home which I love
학생이 쓴 원문
I’ve thought that home is a place where we can rest comfortably.
One of the best condition of home might be comfort.
My home is warm, comfortable and beautiful, because people who love each others live.
Of course, it is really good to be able to see natural sights when we open the window.
That is another good thing.
So I love my home so much.
However in fact I hate cleaning. zzz
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
I don\'t think anybody likes cleaning.^^
You did the job well here.
You are showing more of your talent everyday.
I look forward to greater things from you.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I’ve thought that home is a place where we can rest comfortably.
>> Correct
One of the best condition of home might be comfort.
One of the best condition of home might be comfort.
>> One of the best conditions of home might be comfort.
My home is warm, comfortable and beautiful, because people who love each others live.
My home is warm, comfortable and beautiful, because people who love each others live.
>> My home is warm, comfortable and beautiful, because people who love each other live in it.
Of course, it is really good to be able to see natural sights when we open the window.
Of course, it is really good to be able to see natural sights when we open the window.
>> Correct
That is another good thing.
That is another good thing.
>> Correct
So I love my home so much.
So I love my home so much.
>> Correct
However in fact I hate cleaning.
However in fact I hate cleaning.
>> Honestly, however, I hate cleaning it.
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