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2013-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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1. When I was in elementary school, Principal always had spoken to us with his long speech on Monday. So, My firends and I wanted ellipsis in his speech. 2. Stop talking through your hat! I don't believe you anymore. Please be honest!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

                Thank you for doing your homework. I\'m happy to have you in my class. Enjoy learning! See you later!

~Teacher Verna~

1. When I was in elementary school, Principal always had spoken to us with his long speech on Monday. So, My firends and I wanted ellipsis in his speech.

>>1. When I was in elementary school, the principal had  always  spoken  to us with his long speech on Mondays. So, My friends and I wanted some ellipsis in his speech.

2. Stop talking through your hat! I don\'t believe you anymore. Please be honest!

>>Correct

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