My Hometown
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Thank you for taking some time to do your homework! Good job! You did well in sharing things about your hometown. However, there were some corrections I have made. Please review them if you have free time. Thank you very much! I will talk to you during our classes! ^^,
1. My home friend came to see me. So I\'m very glad.
>>> A friend of mine from my hometown came to see me, so I\'m very glad.
>>> OR I am very glad because a friend of mine from my hometown came to see me.
2. Tangerin is a specialty of my hometown.
>>> Tangerine is a specialty from my hometown.
And my family also has tangerin farm.
>>> My family has a tangerine farm.
3. It\'s easy to meet my sister and brother because they still live in our hometown.
>>> CORRECT!
>>> OR It\'s convenient to meet my sister and brother because they are still living in our hometown.
_TEACHER MICHELLE_
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