My hometown and my home in city

2020-05-29 · 첨삭 강사 Gabby

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi! Gabby! My hometown is in the my memorize. My hometown is under water it call DaeCheng Dam. I sometimes crazy miss it. There are my children days and missed house. The present, I live in small village. This have a small mountain, a small lake and do not traffic road. The mountain and a lake are go to walk many people. This is a beautiful village. See you tomorrow. t

강사 첨삭

Hi. Suzan. I am glad to know about your hometown. See you in our class.
-T. Gabby. :)
Hi! Gabby!
>> Hi Gabby!
My hometown is in the my memorize.
>> My hometown is in my memory.
My hometown is under water it call DaeCheng Dam.
>> It is under the water and it is called DaeCheng Dam.
I sometimes crazy miss it.
>> Sometimes I miss it.
There are my children days and missed house.
>> I missed the house and my childhood days.
The present, I live in small village.
>> Presently, I live in a small village.
This have a small mountain, a small lake and do not traffic road.
>> There is a small mountain, a small lake and there\'s no traffic on the road.
The mountain and a lake are go to walk many people.
>> Many people walk on the mountain and around the lake.
This is a beautiful village.
>> Correct.
See you tomorrow.
>> Correct.

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