My hometown, Gwangju

This is an amazing composition! It felt like I was reading it out of an article.

Thank you so much, [이름] for doing your homework today.

You\'ve introduced your hometown very well. 

I will definitely visit it one day. 

Keep up the great work!

~Teacher Eve.

>> I wrote over 1000 letters because I didn\'t know about the limit of letters.

I\'m sorry about that, and I divided my writing into a few parts.

>> Correct!
“You were not born in here, right?\"

>> Correct!
 My homeroom teacher asked me at the beginning of the semester.

>> Correct!

I wondered why she asked me that. She said that I have unique accent.

>> Correct! 

I live near Busan, Gyeongsangnam-do Province but I have accent of Gwangju, Jeollanam-do Province.

>> I live near Busan, Gyeongsangnam-do Province but I have an accent of Gwangju, Jeollanam-do Province.

Most friends have \"8\" as one of resident registration numbers, but my personal number is \"5\" because I was born in the place different from their hometown.

>> Most friends have \"8\" as one of residential registration numbers, but my personal number is \"5\" because I was born in the place different from their hometown.

I was born in the place far from where I live in.

>> I was born in a place far from where I live.

Therefore, my friends don\'t know well about my hometown, and me neither.

>> Correct!

>> OR: Therefore, my friends don\'t know well about my hometown, and neither do I.

I searched about my hometown through this opportunity, and I\'d like to introduce about it.

>> Correct!

>> I searched about my hometown because of this opportunity, and I\'d like to introduce it.