My hometown, Gwangju(Fin)
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It\'s unfortunate that there is a limit to letterings on the website, but because of your essay, I felt that I gained more knowledge about your city more than searching it on the website.
It was very informative.
Impressing!
I will definitely visit it one day.
You\'re a great writer, [이름].
Keep it up!
~Teacher Eve.
Gwangju is a fascinating city if you know a lot about it.
>> Correct!
Actually I don\'t know many things about it either although it is the place where I was born in.
>> Actually, I don\'t know many things about it either, although it is the place where I was born in.
Now I understand that Gwangju has a beautiful village, an important history, and becomes hometown of many stars.
>> Now I understand that Gwangju is a beautiful village and has an important history and is the hometown of many stars.
If you have a chance, I hope you visit my hometown, Gwangju!
>> Correct!
I wrote a long essay because I didn\'t know the limit of letters. I\'m sorry again:(
>> I wrote a long essay because I didn\'t know about the limit of letters. I\'m sorry again.
Have a nice day and thanks a lot:)
>> Correct!
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