My hometown, Gwangju(Fin)

2020-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Eve

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Gwangju is a fascinating city if you know a lot about it. Actually I don\'t know many things about it either although it is the place where I was born in. Now I understand that Gwangju has a beautiful village, an important history, and becomes hometown of many stars. If you have a chance, I hope you visit my hometown, Gwangju! I wrote a long essay because I didn\'t know the limit of letters. I\'m sorry again:( Have a nice day and thanks a lot:)

강사 첨삭

It\'s unfortunate that there is a limit to letterings on the website, but because of your essay, I felt that I gained more knowledge about your city more than searching it on the website.

It was very informative.

Impressing!

I will definitely visit it one day.

You\'re a great writer, [이름].

Keep it up!

~Teacher Eve.

Gwangju is a fascinating city if you know a lot about it.

>> Correct!

Actually I don\'t know many things about it either although it is the place where I was born in.

>> Actually, I don\'t know many things about it either, although it is the place where I was born in.

Now I understand that Gwangju has a beautiful village, an important history, and becomes hometown of many stars.

>> Now I understand that Gwangju is a beautiful village and has an important history and is the hometown of many stars.

If you have a chance, I hope you visit my hometown, Gwangju! 

>> Correct!

I wrote a long essay because I didn\'t know the limit of letters. I\'m sorry again:(

>> I wrote a long essay because I didn\'t know about the limit of letters. I\'m sorry again.
Have a nice day and thanks a lot:)

>> Correct!

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