My hometown, Gwangju2
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Very informative! Your grammar looks great.
~Teacher Eve.
Gwangju is located in a southern part in Korea.
>> Gwangju is located in the southern part of Korea.
Busan is also located in the south, but Gwangju is in the west and Busan is in the east.
>> Correct!
Gwangju is one of the metropolitan cities in Korea.
>> Correct!
However, many people say that it is not good city to visit because there are few tourist attractions.
>> Correct!
Even though it is well-known as a boring city, I want to tell interesting things about Gwangju.
>> Correct!
First, Penguin village is famous for the photo spot.
>> First, Penguin village is famous as a photo spot.
In this village, only the elderly lived because many young people left to the center of a city.
>> In this village, only the elderly lived because many young people left for the center of a city.
The old made works of art using garbages and Penguin village became popular for them.
>> Correct!
>> OR: The elderly made works of art using garbages and Penguin village became popular for them.
If you visit here, you can take wonderful pictures because of beautiful paintings on the wall.
>> If you visit here, you can take wonderful pictures because of the beautiful paintings on the wall.
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