My hometown is...

My hometown is Gangneung. Its apposit from Incheon province and it took 3 hours from Seoul By bus. It's a city which is one of East coast of South Korea. Gangneung is famous for Touristic site. Especially, in summer, the most people go to Gangneung for summer vacation. Because Gangneung's air and water are clear and quite, many people want to live there. after retire. You can enjoy 4 season in Gangneung. In Spring, there are cherryblossom festival. In summer, Kyungpo beach will make you cool summer vacation. In fall, maple trees would help enjoying climing. and in winter, skiing resort make your witer is so cool. If you have any chance to come my hometowm, I'll be your special tour guide.^^ Good night!

Hi Ms. [이름]!   How are you? Happy Friday! Thanks for doing your homework. ^^   Thank you for sharing me some information about your hometown. I looked at the pictures of Gangneung on the internet, and its a very nice place. I hope I can go there someday. ^^ Let\'s talk more about this on our class. See you!   Teacher Kay ^.^   My hometown is Gangneung. >>Correct! Its apposit from Incheon province and it took 3 hours from Seoul By bus. >>Its opposite of Incheon province and it takes 3 hours to go there from Seoul by bus. (Spell Check: opposite^^) It\'s a city which is one of East coast of South Korea. >>It\'s one of the cities which is located in the East coast of South Korea.Gangneung is famous for Touristic site. >>Gangneung is famous for its tourist site. Especially, in summer, the most people go to Gangneung for summer vacation. >>Correct! Because Gangneung\'s air and water are clear and quite, many people want to live there. after retire. >>Because Gangneung\'s air and water are clear and fresh, many people want to live there after retirement.You can enjoy 4 season in Gangneung.>>You can enjoy the 4 seasons in Gangneung.In Spring, there are cherryblossom festival. >>In Spring, we have the cherryblossom festivalIn summer, Kyungpo beach will make you cool summer vacation. >>In summer, Kyungpo beach will give you a cool summer vacation.In fall, maple trees would help enjoying climing. >>In fall, maple trees would make you enjoy climbing. (Spell Check: climbing^^)and in winter, skiing resort make your witer is so cool.>>And finally, in winter, skiing resorts make your winter so cool.  (Spell Check: winter^^)If you have any chance to come my hometowm, I\'ll be your special tour guide.^^>>Correct!Good night! >>Correct!