My homework{02/21}
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I want to be a model too, but I am too short.: (
2. I want to have golf clubs and I want to have a science book, too!!!
3. Today\'s my favorite day, friday! Yay!^^
4. I bought a drink for my mom but I also boght her a cookbook.
5. I told a story to my classmates about my dream job.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
Thanks for sending your homework. Do enjoy your weekend and take care of yourself.
Cheers,
Jean~~
1. I want to be a model too, but I am too short.: (
>> CORRECT
>> [My height is also a problem for me. I\'m too short!]
2. I want to have golf clubs and I want to have a science book, too!!!
>> I want to have golf clubs and a science book, too!!!
3. Today\'s my favorite day, friday! Yay!^^
>> Today\'s my favorite day, Friday! Yay!
>> or: Friday is my favorite day and today\'s Friday.
4. I bought a drink for my mom but I also boght her a cookbook.
>> I bought a drink for my mom, but I also bought her a cookbook.
>> or: I bought a drink for my mom, but I also got her a cookbook.
5. I told a story to my classmates about my dream job.
>> I told a story about my dream job to my classmates.
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