My homework{03/04}
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Anna was done for her homework so she wll play together with me.
2. I am been at the hotel but I can\'t eat breakfast.
3. How long do you had a dog, Jimin?
4. I love talking on the phone with Jimin.
5. When I go to home, my mom was gone to the store to boght some drink.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thanks again for sending your homework. Take care there!
Cheers,
Jean
1. Anna was done for her homework so she wll play together with me.
>> Anna was done with her homework so she could play together with me.
2. I am been at the hotel but I can\'t eat breakfast.
>> I am at the hotel but I can\'t eat breakfast.
3. How long do you had a dog, Jimin?
>> How long have you had a dog, Jimin?
4. I love talking on the phone with Jimin.
>> CORRECT~~
5. When I go to home, my mom was gone to the store to boght some drink.
>> When I went home, my mom had gone to the store to buy some drinks.
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