My homework{03/06}

2020-03-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I want to learn how to tie my shoes. :( 2. I learned how to write my name when I was in kindergarden. 3. My fried, Judy, wantes to run a marathon. 4. My mom and I both want to speak more languages. 5. My grandfather can drive a car but my grandmother won\'t.

강사 첨삭

Hi again, [이름]!

Thanks for sending your homework! Stay safe and healthy as always. See you next week!

Cheers,
Jean~~

1. I want to learn how to tie my shoes. :(
>>  CORRECT~~

2. I learned how to write my name when I was in kindergarden.
>> I learned how to write my name when I was in kindergarten.
 
3. My fried, Judy, wantes to run a marathon.
>> My friend, Judy, wants to run a marathon.
 
4. My mom and I both want to speak more languages.
>>  CORRECT~~

5. My grandfather can drive a car but my grandmother won\'t.
>> My grandfather can drive a car, but my grandmother can\'t. 

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