My homework{1/22}
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1. I want to buy a large beanbag because beanbag chair was soft.
2. I want to buy a new backpack but my mum don\'t let me buy backpack.
3. My mum gave a birth to me. Thank you, mum~^^
4. I want to buy a new pan for mum.
5. If I can go anywhere, I would go to China.
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Hi [이름]!^^
Thank you for sending your homework. Happy Seollal!
Cheers!
Jean
1. I want to buy a large beanbag because beanbag chair was soft.
>> I want to buy a large beanbag because it is soft.
2. I want to buy a new backpack but my mum don\'t let me buy backpack.
>> I want to buy a new backpack, but my mum doesn\'t let me buy one.
3. My mum gave a birth to me. Thank you, mum~^^
>> CORRECT~~
4. I want to buy a new pan for mum.
>> I want to buy a new pan for my mum.
5. If I can go anywhere, I would go to China.
>> CORRECT~~
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