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I have my tuition fee when I get my allowance.
But if it is less than 10,000 won, l have most of it without saving it.
There are about 40,000 won in my wallet now.
I like saving my allowance!!!
I like saving and using! : ) ; ) ^^
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I have my tuition fee when I get my allowance.
>> I save up for my tuition fee whenever I get my allowance.
But if it is less than 10,000 won, l have most of it without saving it.
>> or: But if it is less than 10,000 won, l spend most of it without saving it.
There are about 40,000 won in my wallet now.
>> correct
I like saving my allowance!!!
>> correct
I like saving and using! : ) ; ) ^^
>> I like saving and using money! : ) ; ) ^^
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