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Koreans celebrate New Years Day eating Rice cake soup.
I really likes eating Rice cake soup because I like that taste.
Rice cake soup is taste little salty a bit but it was so delicious!
I like Rice cake soup but I don\'t like soup.
Because soup is so greasy to me.
And Koreans play fireworks.
I really enjoy looking New Year fireworks because It was so butiful! : - ) ^^
Jean, you will soon went to Korea and see fireworks together! ^^ : )
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Jean
Koreans celebrate New Years Day eating Rice cake soup.
>> Koreans celebrate New Years Day by eating rice cake soup.
I really likes eating Rice cake soup because I like that taste.
>> I really love eating rice cake soup because I like the taste.
Rice cake soup is taste little salty a bit but it was so delicious!
>> A rice cake soup tastes a little salty but it\'s so delicious!
I like Rice cake soup but I don\'t like soup. Because soup is so greasy to me.
>> I like the rice cake soup but I don\'t like the soup Because it\'s so greasy to me.
And Koreans play fireworks.
>> or: And Koreans set off fireworks, too.
I really enjoy looking New Year fireworks because It was so butiful! : - ) ^^
>> I really enjoy looking at fireworks on New Year\'s Day because they look very beautiful! : - ) ^^
Jean, you will soon went to Korea and see fireworks together! ^^ : )
>> Jean, you will soon come to Korea and we can see the fireworks together! ^^ : )
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