My homework{1/30}
학생이 쓴 원문
First, My mum and I protect from coronavirus using mask.
We use that mask(on the picture) but friends said, \\\"It only keeps you don\\\'t spit, It can\\\'t stop a virus.\\\"
It\\\'s true, but It\\\'s better then no mask!!
I\\\'m scared of coronavirus and Wuhan pneumonia.
I feel uncomfortable wearing a mask.
But I don\\\'t want to catch a Wuhan pneumonia.
If that happens, I will not be able to go to school.
That\\\'s tarable : (
Sacond, We wash hands.
washing hands were so~~~ important.
I use hand sanitizer at school, too.
Hand sanitizer is good, too.
It was improtant to wash your hands and wear masks.
You don\\\'t want to catch a Wuhan pneumonia, are you?
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Jean, Hello~ I\'m [이름]\'s mom ^^
How are you?
I\'ve checked web site for her next step.
She likes to read a newspaper(Korean) and debate easily.. but i think the english newspaper is difficult for her
So need your recommend courses(more than 2 kinds of courses for our choice) based on her level. ^^ thanks in advance.
Suzie
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!^^
Thank you for sending your homework. See you in our next class!
Cheers!
Jean
First, My mum and I protect from coronavirus using mask.
>> First, my mum and I can protect ourselves from the coronavirus by using masks.
We use that mask(on the picture) but friends said, \"It only keeps you don\'t spit, It can\'t stop a virus.\"
>> We use that mask (on the picture) but friends said, \"It only contains your saliva, but it can\'t stop the virus from infecting you or spreading.\"
It\'s true, but It\'s better then no mask!!
>> It\'s true, but it\'s better than not wearing a mask at all!
I\'m scared of coronavirus and Wuhan pneumonia.
>> correct
I feel uncomfortable wearing a mask.
>> correct
But I don\'t want to catch a Wuhan pneumonia.
>> But I don\'t want to catch the Wuhan pneumonia.
If that happens, I will not be able to go to school.
>> correct
That\'s tarable : (
>> That\'s terrible. : (
Sacond, We wash hands.
>> Second, we wash our hands.
washing hands were so~~~ important.
>> Washing our hands is so~~~ important.
I use hand sanitizer at school, too.
>> correct
Hand sanitizer is good, too.
>> correct
It was improtant to wash your hands and wear masks.
>> It is important to wash our hands and wear masks.
You don\'t want to catch a Wuhan pneumonia, are you?
>> You don\'t want to catch the Wuhan pneumonia, do you?
>> or: We don\'t want to catch the Wuhan pneumonia, do we?
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