My homework{10/7}
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I blew peper because I don\'t use it anymore.
2. It was windy in Korea.
3. It was stormy in Korea.
4. I like snowy day because snow is my favorite.
5. Fall is sleepy wather.
Jean,I will teach you abut Namdemon.
Namdemon are surround a castle(Gwanghwamun).
And we have market Namdemon.
But Lastly,the Namdemon fired.
We biled it again.
It was Namdemon.
(Can you see photo?)
강사 첨삭
Hello!^^
Thank you for sending your homework.
Cheers!
Jean
1. I blew peper because I don\'t use it anymore.
>> I blew the paper away because I don\'t need it anymore.
2. It was windy in Korea.
>> correct
3. It was stormy in Korea.
>> correct
4. I like snowy day because snow is my favorite.
>> I like snowy days because I love the snow.
5. Fall is sleepy wather.
>> People usually feel sleepy during fall season.
Jean,I will teach you abut Namdemon.
>> Jean, I will tell you about Namdemon.
Namdemon are surround a castle(Gwanghwamun).
>> Namdaemon is surrounded by a castle (Gwanghwamun).
And we have market Namdemon.
>> And we have Namdaemon market.
But Lastly,the Namdemon fired.
>> Lastly, Namdaemon caught fire.
We biled it again.
>> We built it again.
It was Namdemon.
>> This is [Name].
(Can you see photo?)
>> Can you see the photo?
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