my homework

2020-06-15 · 첨삭 강사 Rachel

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Homework: Essay: What are three important things that you always bring with you when you travel? things that I prepare when I travel Umm,, I have never thought that before It\'s hard ..... I am thinking ...... I think the most important thing is money, water, chocolate I have heard that chocolate can stand my hunger longer while traveling Thank you for understanding what I say I was happy my class I hope you enjoy your day^^

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

Thanks for diligently doing your homework even if the you haven\'t thought about the question I gave you. The three things that are important to you are important to me as well. I think I would bring the same things if I were you.

-Rachel

things that I prepare when I travel
Umm,,

>> Um, the things that I prepare when traveling are...
I have never thought that before

>> I haven\'t thought about that before.
It\'s hard ..... I am thinking ......

>> It\'s hard, but let me think about it.
I think the most important thing is money, water, chocolate

>> I think the most important things are money, water and chocolate.
I have heard that chocolate can stand my hunger longer while traveling

>> I have heard that chocolates can help me stand my hunger longer while traveling.
Thank you for understanding what I say

>> Thank you for understanding what I\'m saying.
I was happy my class

>> I am happy in my class.
I hope you enjoy your day^^

>> correct

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