My homework !
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It\'s my first homework teacher ! Please check it ^^
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I think the most difficult thing about working in health care is watching somebody’s death.
>>I think the most difficult thing about working in the health care is watching someone’s death.
In this world, we are living together with lives, but in extreme situations we have to meet end.
>>In this world, we live our lives together, but in extreme situations, we have to end it.
And when we meet it, who always beside us are doctors and nurses.
>>And when we end it, the person next to us is always a doctor and nurse.
I think all over the world, there is no one who are happy in the face of death.
>>I think no one in the world is happy to face death.
So, that’s why I think seeing death is the most difficult thing about working in health care.
>>So, that’s why I think seeing death is the most difficult thing about working in the health care.
If I was working in the hospital, I think I would get mental diseases.
>>If I work in a hospital, I think I\'ll get mental illness.
In my case, I really hate blood and surgeries.
>>CORRECT!
It’s too scary for me.
>>CORRECT!
But these days like Corona season, people who engage in health care will more often experience death.
>>But these days that there is coronavirus, health care workers see death more often.
So I really feel sorry for them.
>>CORRECT!
I hope that we can go back to the world before Corona.
>>CORRECT!
Anyway, this is my first homework.
>>CORRECT!
I think I’m not good at writing.
>>CORRECT!
Kkk,, Please check my homework and tell me something to change.
>>Please check my homework and tell me what to change.
Thank you teacher !
>>CORRECT!
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