My homework

2020-11-03 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

1st. I want to study like a friend of my teacher, Sharon. 2nd. I’d like freely talk with foreigners abroad. 3rd. I want to dialogue and share our thoughts based on a theme. 4th. I strongly hope that I’ll know about the country, people, cultures, and education of the Philippines. 5th. I want to learn standard language and polite language.

강사 첨삭

H[이름]!
Your expressions are really clear.
I\'m glad you were able to share your expectations.
You don\'t have to worry.
I will take note of everything.
We\'ll make our class fun and productive.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I want to study like a friend of my teacher, Sharon.
>> I want to study with Teacher Sharon like we are friends.
I’d like freely talk with foreigners abroad.
>> I\'d like to speak freely with foreigners abroad.
I want to dialogue and share our thoughts based on a theme.
>> I want to discuss and share our thoughts on a particular topic.
I strongly hope that I’ll know about the country, people, cultures, and education of the Philippines.
>> I strongly hope that I’ll know about the country, people, culture, and education in the Philippines.
I want to learn standard language and polite language.
>> Correct

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