My homework
학생이 쓴 원문
The person I think of as an idol is my mother, who has raised me and my brother all my life and is very diligent and frugal. My mother sacrifices for us.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon [이름] :) I admire your mom! Good job for doing your homework. Keep up
~Teacher Aki :)
The person I think of as an idol is my mother, who has raised me and my brother all my life and is very diligent and frugal.>>>CORRECT!
OR >>> The person that I consider as an idol is mother who raised us all our lives and who is very diligent and frugal.
My mother sacrifices for us.
>> My mother sacrificed a lot for us.
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