My homework{11/27}
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I want to travel with my best teacher, Jean.^-^
2. I like study with my grandmother.
3. I flip the pencil but my friend flip he pen.
4. I twirl my scar.
5. You could be hard work with this.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!^^
Thank you for sending your homework.
Cheers!
Jean
1. I want to travel with my best teacher, Jean.^-^
>> CORRECT~~
2. I like study with my grandmother.
>> I like studying with my grandmother.
3. I flip the pencil but my friend flip he pen.
>> I flipped the pencil, but my friend flipped the pen.
4. I twirl my scar.
>> I twirl my scarf.
5. You could be hard work with this.
>> You could work hard with this.
>> or: You could be hard working with this.
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