My homework

2021-07-08 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

학생이 쓴 원문

1)ken and his rriend went to the fair. 2)ken ate a cake and funnel popcorn. 3)His friend drank very lemonade. 4)They rode a carousel and ferr wheel. 5)They enjoyed watching stage shows.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Wow, you were able unscrambled the sentences well . Keep up!
~Aki :)
1)ken and his rriend went to the fair.
>>> Ken and his friend went to the fair.
2)ken ate a cake and funnel popcorn.
>>> Ken ate a cake and funnel popcorn.
3)His friend drank very lemonade.
>>> His friend drank a very cold lemonade.
4)They rode a carousel and ferr wheel.
>>> They rode a carousel and ferry\'s wheel.
5)They enjoyed watching stage shows.
>>> CORRECT!

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