My homework
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My least favorite job is an agency that does everything for money. I don\'t like the job because people who have it pay for it kill it.
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Hello [이름]! Thank you for spending some time doing your homework. Keep it up! Don\'t lose that passion :)
~Aki:)
My least favorite job is an agency that does everything for money.
>>> CORRECT
OR>>> The least favorite job that I consider is an agency that does everything to earn money.
I don\'t like the job because people who have it pay for it kill it.
>>> I don\'t like this job because people who have it should pay to kill it.
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