My homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1) hairdresser 2) cook 3) pilot 4) housewife 5) teacher
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! How are you today? I haven\'t seen you for two days. I hope you are well. Please make sentences next time to practice your wriitng skills. Have a great day!
~Aki :)
These are the jobs that are ideal to me
1) hairdresser
>>> I like the hairdresser\'s job.
2) cook
>>> I like the job of the cook.
3) pilot
>>> Being a pilot is good too.
4) housewife
>>> It\'s good to become a housewife.
5) teacher
>>> The job of a teacher is very ideal.
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