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2021-08-04 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I manage my anger in rest. Just lie down on my bed and take a deep breath with my eyes closed.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kane! ^^

When you start feeling angry, try deep breathing, positive self-talk, or stopping your angry thoughts. Breathe deeply from your diaphragm. Slowly repeat a calm word or phrase such as \"relax\" or \"take it easy.\" Repeat it to yourself while breathing deeply until the anger subsides.

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I manage my anger in rest.

>> I manage my anger by resting.

Just lie down on my bed and take a deep breath with my eyes closed.

>> I just lie down on my bed and take a deep breath with my eyes closed.

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