My homework
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I think a good job is a place where you can get a lot of money and finish it quickly and work for a long time.
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I think a good job is a place where you can get a lot of money and finish it quickly and work for a long time.
>>> I think a good job is being in a place where you can get a lot of money and finish it quickly and have that work for a long time.
>>> I think a good job is being in a place where you can get a lot of money and finish it quickly and have that job for the rest of your life.
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