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2021-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

학생이 쓴 원문

I think it is important for students. Because we have a limit on study in only school. So I think we need to have some extra studies.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kane! ^^

I think this is beneficial for students in terms of preparing for the universities that they are gonna go to in the future. But this can also lessen the time to enjoy you childhood since you would be studying most of the time. It has both advantages and disadvantages.

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I think it is important for students.

>> I think it is important for students because our studying time is limited in our school.

Because we have a limit on study in only school.

>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.

So I think we need to have some extra studies.

>>So, I think we need to have some extra time to study.

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