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2021-08-19 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I\'d like to change my interest in study. Because now I have little interest in study, and it makes me to boring in studying. So, I hope me to be more interested in study. That\'s my wish.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kane! ^^

In order to avoid stagnation, it\'s important for changes to be made almost continuously. No matter whether it\'s changing the way your present yourself, developing your skills, takin a course or changing your routine – you are your own boss in life and a huge amount of change comes from within. But at some point, we should also be contented with what we have in our life. :)

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I\'d like to change my interest in study.
>> I\'d like to change my interest in studying.

Because now I have little interest in study, and it makes me to boring in studying.
>> Because now I have little interest in studying, and it makes me to bored all the time when I have classes. 

So, I hope me to be more interested in study. That\'s my wish.
>> So, I hope me to be more interested in studying. That\'s my wish.

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