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If you had 3 wishes, what would it be and why?
If I had 3 wishes, one is for my family to be healthy, and another is also for my family to be happy, and the other is that my dream comes true, because I love my family, and I like what I dream. So, I dreaming my dreams to be come to me in true.
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Hi [이름]! ^^
Those are good wishes. I hope they would come true :)
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If I had 3 wishes, one is for my family to be healthy, and another is also for my family to be happy, and the other is that my dream comes true, because I love my family, and I like what I dream.
>> If I had 3 wishes, I would wish for my family to be healthy and happy. I also home that my dreams would come true. I love my family and am looking forward to my dreams.
So, I dreaming my dreams to be come to me in true.
>>So I dream that my wishes would come true.
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