My Homework
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What do you think is the best city in Korea and why?
I think it is the Seoul because it is Korean capital and so many foreigners live there with Korean. So, we can say that is the best city in Korea for the foreigners!
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Hi [이름]! ^^
Yes, I heard that that city is a great place. I can\'t wait to go there someday. Thanks for sharing. ^^
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I think it is the Seoul because it is Korean capital and so many foreigners live there with Korean.
>> I think it is Seoul because it it the capital of South Korea so many foreigners live here.
So, we can say that is the best city in Korea for the foreigners!
>> So, we can say that is it the best city in South Korea for the foreigners.
>> So, we can say that is it the best city in South Korea for the foreigners.
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