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2021-09-02 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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What do you think is the hardest job in the world and why? I think working in hard place is the hardest job because the place where your working is hard, the work will also be hard.

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Hi [이름]! ^^

Yes, your working environment definitely affects you job that\'s why you need to choose wisely.

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I think working in hard place is the hardest job because the place where your working is hard, the work will also be hard.

>>I think working in a hard place is the hardest job because if the place you work in is not good, your job will be hard as well.

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