My homework

2021-09-07 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

학생이 쓴 원문

I had more time before I was interested in studying English. At that time, I met my friend and worked out. If I am not studying English now, maybe I am learning something else.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]! You are very diligent in doing your homework. Thank you for expressing your thoughts through writing. May you always find happiness in learning English.
~Aki :)
I had more time before I was interested in studying English. 
>>> CORRECT!
OR  >>> I had a lot of free time before I got interested in studying English.
At that time, I met my friend and worked out. 
>>> At that time. I used to meet my friend and we worked out together.
If I am not studying English now, maybe I am learning something else.
>>> CORRECT
OR >>>  If I am not learning English now,  I maybe learning something else.

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