My homework
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I rarely use public transportation because I have my own car. I like the subway because there is no traffic jam and I like the bus because I can see outside.
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I rarely use public transportation because I have my own car.
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> It is not common for me to use public transportation because I have a car.
I like the subway because there is no traffic jam and I like the bus because I can see outside.
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> However, I prefer the subway because I won\'t be stuck in a traffic jam and I also like the bu because of the view outside.
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