My Homework

2021-09-29 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

학생이 쓴 원문

I\'m going to make a rule that is about students shouldn\'t take other friends\' things because my friends take others\' things and trifle with them.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! :)

School rules are usually associated with classroom management and school discipline. In organization or institution is formed because a goal needs to be reached. In order for these goals to be reached, there must be a set of rules, regulations, and policies to be followed so it is the same thing for schools.

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I\'m going to make a rule that is about students shouldn\'t take other friends\' things because my friends take others\' things and trifle with them.

>> I\'m going to make a rule that is about students shouldn\'t steal things from other students because lately one of my friends experienced it.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기