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If I had a lot of money, I would have several cars. People who collect cars can be their hobby and likely to use them depending on their use or mood. As if you\'replacing clothes.
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If I had a lot of money, I would have several cars.
>>> If I had a lot of money, I would also have several cars.
People who collect cars can be their hobby and likely to use them depending on their use or mood.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> Collecting cars can be a hobby for some people and likely to se them depending on their preference.
As if you\'replacing clothes.
>>> As if they are replacing their clothes.
>>> Just like changing their clothes
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