My homework
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If Genie grants me three wishes, I will ask all my family to stay healthy, to be rich, and to live happily. I\'m sure most people would do the same.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Like all other people everyone wants to stay healthy become rich and to have a happy life. Thank you for doing your homework. Stay well and safe!
Aki:)
If Genie grants me three wishes, I will ask all my family to stay healthy, to be rich, and to live happily. I\'m sure most people would do the same.
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OR >>> If a genie would grant me three wishes, I would ask what other people do; for our family to stay healthy, to become rich and to live a happy life.
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