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The reason why I am always fast is that I eat in a hurry when I eat. When I worked as a hair designer, I didn\'t have lunch time, so I had to run while eating when a customer comes.
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The reason why I am always fast is that I eat in a hurry when I eat.
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> I guess the reason why I consider myself fast because I am in a hurry whenever I eat.
When I worked as a hair designer, I didn\'t have lunch time, so I had to run while eating when a customer comes.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> As a former hair designer, I don\'t have lunch time, so I had to attend to a customer even when I am in the middle of my meal.
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