My homework
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When I like to meet new people, I can experience new things, and in other cases,There are times when it\'s annoying to know about the people of Season\'s Greetings. It\'s hard to find new people who agree with me.
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It was lovely meeting you today. See you when I see you!
Cheers,
Jean~~
When I like to meet new people, I can experience new things, and in other cases,There are times when it\'s annoying to know about the people of Season\'s Greetings.
>> I like to meet new people because I can experience new things, but in other cases, there are times when it\'s annoying [to know about the people of Season\'s Greetings.] [I\'m sorry but I don\'t understand the clause I put in a bracket so I can\'t edit or correct it. I just edited the first part of the sentence.]
It\'s hard to find new people who agree with me.
>> It\'s hard to find new people who have the same interests or personality as me.
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